Write a Children's Book

The editing of your picture book is usually one of the harder things to get done – once you have your story down on paper. All stories are usually edited and revised, so remember that you’re not alone when you need to work through this process! It’s mainly to check for mistakes and spot common problems that occur.

Here are some of the common problems to look out for.

• Structure and Vocabulary – Simple, but specific vocabulary is better than over complex sentences that children most likely won’t understand. Sentences work better when short.
• Unnecessary Words – Look for words like Just, but, and however. If you say things as plainly as possible you can’t go too far wrong.
• Alliteration – Does the story flow well when it’s read aloud?

For young children, dialogue tags can be important. For instance, the tag said tends to vanish when a story is read, so this should be used more so than other words like “She Cried”. For example “Watch out for that bumpy road!” she cried. Normally we don’t tend to cry when we warn people about things.

When the first edit of your picture book is complete, you will then be ready to revise further, so your work is in tip-top shape, especially if you intend to submit your work to publishers.